HURRICANE UPDATE
A group from Harvard (which is about as reliable as one can get) just published a study in the New England Journal of Medicine (an institution of impeccable reputation) stating that the death toll of "64" in Hurricane Maria, which devastated Puerto Rico on September 20, 2017, was off by about 4600! Yes, one third of those are attributable to inadequate care in the days following the hurricane. Nonetheless, the statistics—the result of house-to-house surveys— are staggering. And an indication of just how great the devastation was. And still is. Electricity still has not been restored in some parts of the island, and on June 1st, we began a new hurricane season. How much of the death discrepancy was due to the overwhelming nature of the storm, how much to inadequate local government, how much to obfuscation by the federal government? Who knows? Yet this devastation could happen again anywhere, any time over the next four months. 
In comparison with the U. S. mainland's greatest storm boondoggle, Hurricane Katrina, "only" 1600 died in New Orleans. Supposedly FEMA learned from its mistakes there, but with this new revelation from Puerto Rico . . .
Hurricane Season 2018, GO AWAY, FAR, FAR AWAY!
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Speaking of the fall of 2017 . . . on November 18, 2017, I posted a short story to this blog. It was the just-finished opening chapter of Royal Rebellion, an Interim between Book 3 and Book 4, which takes place three years later. Since Royal Rebellion will finally make its debut on Thursday, June 14, I decided to reprise "The Witch and the Wolf" for those who have not read it. It makes a good introduction to the pacifist planet Psyclid, its king and queen, the four royal children who have turned their backs on their upbringing and joined a rebellion against a classic aggressive Empire . . . and to the their significant (highly significant) others. 
 
Grace note: From the standpoint of Writing & Editing tips, I like to think "Interim" is a good example of an opening chapter that reminds readers of characters from Books 1-3, as well as providing an intro to the characters for those who have not read the first three books. "Interim" also ties up a romantic loose end that simply didn't fit into the previous books but needed a Happily Ever After before Book 4 could get down to defeating the nasty old Empire! 
INTERIM
or
THE WITCH AND THE WOLF
The ballroom, Crystalia, the Psyclid royal palace
Two Blue Moon cycles after the Battle of Psyclid
   The music flourished to a close, the women’s skirts flaring in a 
final kaleidoscope of color before settling to hug their bodies close as
 they dipped into curtsies. Their partners bowed, the men’s bright 
tunics competing with the women for which gender would add the most 
brilliance and sparkle to the evening. 
   All but one, that is—a man slunk into the shadows behind a marble 
pillar, his back against the wall. Although he wore the required tight 
white hose, his tunic of black velvet fell well below his knees, his 
sole concession to fashion the intricate gold embroidery on his sleeves 
and on the bottom of the tunic. Embroidery he could not reject because 
his sister had created the garment with her very own hands, so what was a
 man to do?
   Except hide. 
   He should not be here. This was a night for celebrating the completion of Psyclid’s 
ridó.
   A full two Blue Moon cycles after it was needed.
   He had failed. Men had died, ships were lost because there was a gap 
in the force field intended to protect Psyclid from the Regs. From the 
revenge of a mighty Emperor on a pacifist planet that asked only to be 
left alone.
   He, T’kal Killiri, had been tasked with getting the job done, and 
he’d fallen short. He was here tonight only because King Ryal had 
ordered it. And if there was one thing the Pysclid engineer was, it was 
loyal to the crown.
   A trumpet fanfare echoed through the vast ballroom. T’kal winced, 
recognizing the signal for what it was. The royal family was arriving 
and the ceremony was about to begin. The ceremony he wanted no part of.
   
Fyddit! (Only the Regs had profanity strong enough for the occasion.)
   There was a great shuffling as the crowd parted, making a broad aisle
 from the ballroom’s double-doored entrance to the dais raised a good 
two meters off the floor, where a gilded throne with scarlet velvet seat
 and back, flanked by equally colorful sidechairs, awaited the Psyclid 
royal family.
   And there they were, emerging from the crowd, ascending the 
steps—King Ryal and his wife Jalaine. Six feet behind, the Princess 
M’lani, her red-gold hair gleaming in the light of the crystal 
chandeliers, her beauty unrivaled, even by the sister she had replaced 
as Heir Apparent. At her side, not accepting his proper place a few 
steps behind, was her husband Jagan, the Sorcerer Prime. The man who 
came late to the rebellion. T’kal’s lips curled in remembered derision. 
He and Jagan Mondragon were never going to be close. It had, in fact, 
taken considerable effort by the Princess M’lani to get them to work 
together to save Psyclid from the Regs. 
   
What . . . ? 
   Shaken out of his stubborn indifference, T’kal stared as another 
couple mounted the steps.    Unexpected guests from Blue Moon. Not Tal 
and Kass, but the youngest royal and his Herc wife—K’kadi the bastard. 
K’kadi, whose powers seemed to expand from minute to minute. K’kadi the 
Strange turned K’kadi the Seer. The despair of the royal family become 
its most powerful weapon.
   Maybe.
   T’Kal, who had witnessed one of K’kadi’s losses of concentration, still had his doubts.
   Among the missing royal children was King Ryal’s other bastard, his 
eldest child, B’aela Flammia, a witch best known as the Sorcerer Prime’s
 foremost assistant and long-time mistress. Before, that is, she 
transferred her favors to the acting Reg governor, Admiral Rand Kamal, 
nephew of Darroch, emperor of twelve star systems, the man who abhored 
the defiance of an obscure pacifist planet that refused to stay 
conquered. Unfortunately, Baela’s notoriety would never go away, even 
though her liaison with Kamal had been as a spy for her country. T’kal, 
knowing her as well as he did, suspected B’aela had likely refused to 
join the royal parade. She had not, after all, been raised a royal, as 
had Ryal’s other three children. 
   She was here, though—somewhere in the crowded ballroom. T’kal always 
knew when she was near. Whether on a dark, dangerous night in Oban or in
 Crystalia’s crowded ballroom, her scent filled his head. A problem he 
had steadfastly ignored for many years.
   It was no surprise, however, that Tal and Kass weren’t here. Tal, 
leader of the rebellion, had sent a handwritten letter congratulating 
T’kal on the completion of the 
ridó. And confided that his wife, 
once Psyclid's Princess Royal, was suffering through a bad first 
trimester and would be unable to attend the festivities. As for his own 
absence, he hoped T’kal would understand. He still liked to think that 
keeping a low profile was protecting his parents and brother and sister 
who still lived on Regula Prime. Although, Tal added, it was more likely
 that by now half the Nebulon Sector must suspect that former Reg 
Captain Talryn Rigel and his huntership
 Orion had not been lost in a battle with the Nyx.
   T’kal ducked his head, glowering at the intricately patterned floor 
of green and white marble tiles. Tal’s note had suddenly become a stark 
reminder that the battle against the Regs was far from over. That 
celebration—even a small one like tonight—was premature.
   Another fanfare. The crowd surged forward, the gap filling in as all eyes turned toward the dais.
   Gap. T’kal winced. 
   King Ryal, still a vital, fine-looking man though closer to sixty 
than fifty, stepped forward, his words smoothly amplified so they could 
be heard in the farthest corner of the ballroom. Even all the way to the
 wall stuck to T’kal Killiri’s back. “Friends, guests, welcome! You all 
know why we are here. Tonight we honor a man who has gone too long 
without recognition.”
   As he spoke, Ryal’s sharp eyes searched the crowd. Not a sign of 
tonight’s honoree. “When we were invaded by the Regulons . . .” 
Psyclid's king continued. “When we were shocked, confused, and in 
despair because we had no idea how to fight back, one person stepped 
forward. One person sought out other brave souls, found ways to make the
 Regs sorry they’d ever thought of invading Psyclid. Five years later 
when our Sorcerer Prime returned from exile, he found a large and 
effective resistance force already in place, considerably shortening our
 march toward Freedom Day.”
   Murmurs of agreement and approval swept through crowd. T’kal continued to study the colorful swirls in the marble tiles.
   “So naturally, when the Emperor threatened us once again, we turned to the same man, putting him in charge of building a
 ridó
 twenty times the size of the one protecting Blue Moon, a task which 
required re-discovering a technology long lost. And in spite of the near
 impossibility of what we asked of him, the
 ridó was built, only a tiny gap over open ocean unprotected by the time the Regs attacked.”
   King Ryal paused, dropping his gaze to his eldest daughter, who was 
standing in the front row just below the dais. “There are many other 
heroic acts I could name, but Killiri is a modest man. He will tell you 
that he failed because the 
ridó was not complete on the day the 
Regs struck. But where would we be now if it had not held over Crystal 
City? Over every city, town, and field on the planet? Where would we be 
without . . . T’KAL KILLIRI!?”
   T’kal wanted to turn tail and run, but he settled for pushing his 
back tighter against the wall as the roar of the crowd nearly deafened 
him. He didn’t stand a chance of remaining anonymous, of course, since 
his friends,  knowing how he felt about this event, had stacked the odds
 against him long before the evening began. His brother-in-law, Anton 
Stagg, descended on him from one side; Master Sergeant Joss Quint from 
the other. In front, two of the men who had been with T’kal that night 
in Oban opened a way through the crowd, both grinning from ear to ear.
   He’d known it would come to this. There was no way out of it. And now
 that the moment was here, he said all the right things, praised those 
who had done the actual engineering. Thanked those who labored so long 
and hard at a task whose completion seemed more a miracle than a 
technological triumph. He even thanked that constant source of 
annoyance, Jagan Mondragon, Sorcerer Prime. Looking back through the 
years, it was a wonder they hadn’t killed each other.
   Not that he said that, of course. T’kal’s lips twitched. No, he and B’aela’s long-time lover would never be friends.
   After granting a teeth-gritting half-minute to acknowledge the 
crowd’s shouts, howls, claps, and stamping feet, T’kal forced himself to
 descend the steps with dignity, his full attention on the goal of 
losing himself in the mass of people below. Except . . .
   B’aela was there. She seized his hand, the crowd melting away before them, with no more hindrance than calls of 
Well done! Thank you! and a fervent 
May the Goddess bless you!
 to mark their passage across the ballroom. The open doors to a balcony 
closed behind them, T’kal’s self-appointed bodyguards taking up a stance
 before them, barring any who might try to follow.
   “A well-executed maneuver, Highness,” T’kal drawled. “I suppose you planned the whole thing.”
   Dark eyes that had been sparkling with joy turned frigid. “Highness?” she asked. “Since when, T’kal?”
   “Since the day I learned the truth.”
   “Ancient history, Daman Killiri,” she returned with equally lethal formality. “You have had plenty of time to get over it.”
   “I have had time to face the reality of it.”
   “T’kal! We’ve spoken fifty, a hundred times since then, and never before—”
   “We were colleagues, working together against the Regs, working to restore the country—”
   “We were friends. 
Are friends!”
   T’kal looked out over the palace curtain wall to the shimmering 
beauty of Crystal City at night. At the crystalline buildings lit in a 
rainbow of colors topped by black sky, the infinite number of stars 
outshone by the light of Psyclid’s three moons—Blue at full, Red a mere 
crescent, and White down to a waning half low on the horizon. He was 
being stubborn. Again. The quality that made him so good at getting 
things done. And so poor at achieving any personal happiness.
   He suspected tonight was now or never. B’aela had played her part. It
 was his turn to be  braver than he’d ever had to be before. Even that 
time on Oban.
   “A fine setting for solving problems,” he offered.
   “Yes.” Her face softened ever so slightly. The militant look in her dark eyes faded to questioning.
   And there she was, the only woman with the capacity to make him 
forget N’tali. Even when he had not liked B’aela Flammia, she had 
stirred him out of the grief he had wrapped around himself for so long. 
T’kal took in the view that was far more fascinating than the beauty of 
Crystal City at night: a strong nose in a pale narrow face, huge brown 
eyes accustomed to hiding every emotion, the masses of dark brown hair 
as curly as his own, confined tonight in an intricate array of braids 
and studded with diamonds. If he didn’t unfreeze his tongue and say what
 needed to be said, he really was the greatest fool in the Nebulon Sec—
   “Sometimes,” B’aela said with care, “I miss the days of the 
resistance. There was a camaraderie, a special something impossible to 
recapture.”
   He knew exactly what she meant. He’d had thoughts, even back in the 
days when she was Jagan Mondragon’s discarded mistress. Thoughts that 
coalesced in Oban. And were shattered when she offered herself, 
willingly, to the enemy. Disintegrated completely when B’aela’s mother 
revealed she was born of the House of Orlondami, fathered by a king.
   Which, of course, reminded him of another problem—the once-favorite 
nephew of Emperor Darroch. “I heard that Kamal came back with you from 
Hercula,” T’kal said, tossing yet another obstacle into the mix. “That 
he fought the Regs. Evidently, your powers are even more wondrous than 
anticipated.”
   B’aela sucked in a sharp breath. “You cannot think—you who were my 
contact—” She broke off, gaping at him. “You know quite well I went to 
Kamal for revenge. And as a spy. You cannot believe that now we are 
free, I would—” 
   But, agonizingly, she had to admit it was true. Regulon Admiral Rand 
Kamal, former acting governor of Psyclid, had been at the forefront of 
the Regulon attack on Hercula. He had lost his ship, been captured, and 
ended up commanding an armed merchant
 against the Reg’s latest 
attack on Psyclid. And she, B’aela Flammia, had shared a ship with her 
former lover all those long weeks home from Hercula to Blue Moon. T’kal 
had every right to wonder if she had played a role—perhaps an intimate 
role—in his defection from the Empire.
   “You will appreciate the irony, I'm sure,” she returned, her tone now
 cool and slightly caustic. “On our journey to Hercula, I shared a cabin
 with K’kadi’s mother, Anneli, and we have kept in touch. Which is how I
 know that Rand Kamal has a new interest in his life. And that it has 
become serious enough he may make the liaison permanent if his wife ever
 grants him a divorce.”
   T’kal rubbed at the frown lines on his forehead. Kamal and K’kadi’s 
mother?
 Then again, it was a pairing no stranger than the other convoluted 
romances that marked the rebel cause. Tal Rigel, once a Reg Fleet 
Captain, and Kass, former crown princess of Psyclid.  M’lani married to 
her sister’s former fiancé, Jagan Mondragon. K’kadi from Blue Moon and 
Alala, the Herculon warrior. T’kal’s own sister married to Anton Stagg, a
 Reg. 
   Of all the royal children, only B’aela, the eldest, remained 
unmarried. And, to T'kal's gut-wrenching surprise, seemed to be hinting 
at an interest in the weirdest pairing yet.
   “There is a certain matter Ryal did not mention,” B’aela said. “He 
wished to spare me further humiliation, but we have not forgotten that 
among your many heroics, I owe you my life.”
   “I would have gone to Oban for anyone who needed rescuing.”
   “I know . . . but it wasn’t like that, was it?”
   T’kal drew a deep breath. “No.”
   “You were so angry when I went to Kamal. Every time I reported to you, you positively seethed.”
   “Yes.”
   “I know you loved your wife. A good woman. Pure." The words tumbled 
out. "It is the talk of Psyclid that you have never looked at another—”
   I looked. I did not act.”
   “Oh.”
   He knew what she was trying to say. An acknowledgment of something 
they’d each known for a long time, and for a myriad reasons refused to 
examine more closely. 
   “B’aela,” he burst out, “you know what I am!”
   “As you know what I am.” 
A whore. Unworthy of the Hero of Psyclid. Most particularly,  the role of mother to his children.
   “Feelings aside,” T’kal said, ignoring the scarlet letter B’aela was 
certain must be flashing  on her forehead, “I fear the pairing of witch 
and wolf.” 
   Dear goddess! She’d thought of all the other reasons he might object,
 but not that. Under the light of a full Blue Moon, B’aela studied the 
man she had admired for so long—the dark eyes, the square jaw, the 
sturdy body with shoulders broad enough to carry the whole of Psyclid on
 his back. “When I was very young,” she told the Alpha of his pack, “I 
thought I knew what love was. I wanted the Sorcerer Prime as a plant 
longs for the sun. But the sun burns, and in the wisdom of a more 
advanced age, another man caught my eye and my admiration. A man who 
flew half way round the world to save me from the most terrible 
degradation of my life. A man who single-handedly took down the Reg 
Governor-General—”
   “‘Handedly’ is perhaps not the most accurate word,” T’kal drawled.
   Distracted for a moment by his grim humor, B’aela pictured a shaggy 
gray wolf tearing out the throat of Governor-General Anton Grigorev. She
 had not been there, but she had savored the reality of it many times 
over.
   B’aela drew a shuddering breath and continued with the most difficult
 words she would ever have to say. The truly important ones she had to 
get out because it appeared T’kal never would. She was unworthy, she 
knew that, but she had crafted every second of these snatched minutes on
 the balcony, and she would not throw the opportunity away. 
   “I wish to continue my list,” she said, meeting him eye to eye and 
emphasizing each word. “A man I have come to love, and whose children I 
would like to make my own.” Her chin jutted up.  “Even though I know I 
have fallen too far and have no right to ask for any man’s love—” 
   “Hush!” At long last, T’kal did not hesitate. He folded her tight 
against his chest. “I would say madness has attacked us both, but since 
it’s been this way with us for some years now . . .” B’aela felt a 
chuckle ripple through his chest. “Whichever way I look at it, it’s 
wrong. Except you are the only woman who has ever tempted me into a 
second love. So I fear we may be stuck with each other.” His lips 
against her temple, T’kal added, “As part of your plans, you wouldn’t by
 any chance have a
 limm standing by?”
   “But of course. How else would I take home the man of the hour?”
   K’kadi, who had been released from the dais and was dancing with 
Talora Lassan, the woman some called his second wife, smiled and nodded 
his satisfaction. It was about time B’aela took his mother’s advice. 
Which, he realized, would likely make him related to four of the most 
powerful men in the Nebulon Sector: Tal Rigel, Jagan Mondragon, T’kal 
Killiri, and in the not-too-distant future, the Emperor's nephew, Rand 
Kamal.
   The end of the Empire was coming. It would take a while, but it would
 happen. That much he knew. Though who would sit on which throne—which 
thrones would even exist when all was said and done—was beyond even his 
powers of prognostication.
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